jilted

6 Sep

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24 Responses to “jilted”

  1. Heaven September 6, 2011 at 5:40 pm #

    Sad and hurtful…. nice haiku ~

  2. becca givens September 6, 2011 at 7:12 pm #

    Ouch!!!

  3. Leo September 7, 2011 at 12:26 pm #

    Sad to see justice so low. But then again, thats the state of the world nowadays.

  4. fiveloaf September 7, 2011 at 11:40 pm #

    best i have read this round.. 🙂 my entry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/

  5. charlesmashburn September 8, 2011 at 7:45 am #

    sad but true. Very nice write!

    My trip down memory lane: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/

  6. Sarah Johnston September 8, 2011 at 8:46 am #

    Our poor superhero this one made me smile well done
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/

    • muzzleflashing September 8, 2011 at 9:45 am #

      Thanks! I’ve always thought that making the reader smile is a good goal. =)

  7. The Noiseless Cuckooclock September 8, 2011 at 9:44 am #

    compact description of the character.

    good luck to him, have fun!

    • muzzleflashing September 8, 2011 at 9:48 am #

      Thanks for the comment! I, too, wish Justice the best of luck. =)

  8. Jacqui Binford-Bell September 8, 2011 at 12:49 pm #

    My sentiments exactly but never as nicely put.

  9. The Orange Tree September 9, 2011 at 6:38 am #

    apt words.

    beautiful entry.

    😉

    • muzzleflashing September 9, 2011 at 10:35 am #

      Thank you so much! I appreciate you stopping by! =)

  10. RoughWaterJohn September 9, 2011 at 11:27 am #

    This packed a lot of punch in so few words. Very well written, thanks!

  11. ShonEjai September 11, 2011 at 9:17 am #

    Wow! A powerful poem indeed. I love how the poem and the photo complimented each other. I am starting a challenge just for photographer/poets called A Picture Speaks. I do hope you stop by and submit an entry.

    • muzzleflashing September 11, 2011 at 11:13 am #

      Thanks! I will definitely check out your site and I appreciate you stopping by! =)

  12. Nefarious X September 13, 2011 at 1:12 am #

    This one was fun. Very cool

  13. Rosie September 13, 2011 at 2:56 am #

    Jilted by justice…I’ll remember this. Fresh!
    Rosie

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