this lime

25 Sep

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14 Responses to “this lime”

  1. R. Hernandez September 25, 2011 at 8:07 pm #

    Haha, it really does look like a sea animal.

  2. Ramesh Sood September 25, 2011 at 11:11 pm #

    Well, well, well.. what do I say.. so I don’t..

  3. vivinfrance September 25, 2011 at 11:35 pm #

    an inside-out sea anemone. 😀

  4. andy sewina September 26, 2011 at 8:00 am #

    Phew, metamorphosed is the thing!

  5. The Cello Strings September 26, 2011 at 12:47 pm #

    love it,

    crispy piece, love the art style..

    Happy Rally.

  6. Traci B September 27, 2011 at 5:38 am #

    An unexpected and refreshing take on the phoenix myth; well written (and shot). 🙂

  7. magicalmysticalteacher September 27, 2011 at 3:33 pm #

    But, but, but…is he a phoenix??? 🙂

    Can you see a phoenix here or here?

    • muzzleflashing September 27, 2011 at 6:51 pm #

      No…but he “phoenixed” into a sea anemone. Didn’t you know “phoenix” is a verb as well as a noun? =)

  8. The Orange Tree September 28, 2011 at 12:52 pm #

    verbs you use are like sound bites, love the word flow.

  9. charlesmashburn September 28, 2011 at 4:26 pm #

    That is too cool. I like it!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/

  10. Leonargo September 29, 2011 at 1:39 pm #

    Wonderful rhyming transition here! Also a tough haiku, as they should be, to understand. Must say this is brilliant!

  11. geezergirl1 October 2, 2011 at 7:51 pm #

    does look like a sea creature.. ha. nice

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